Prepositions in graph discription

The graph shows the number  cases of violence  Newtown between the years 1970 and 2010. As an overall trend, it is clear that the number  cases of violence increased fairly rapidly until the mid eighties, remained constant for around a decade  700 cases before dropping zero the late 90s. 1990, the number cases stood approximately 300. That number rose steadily 500 by 1999 and then more sharply 900 2003. this point the number cases remained stable until 2005 before plummeting zero by 2008. 2008  2010 Newtown was free violence.

conclusion, the graph shows that violence was increasingly prevalent until the 2005 when it was eradicatedfrom Newtown.

 

The graph shows the number  donors  Oldtown between the years 1980 and 2010. As an overall trend, it is clear that the number  donors has decreased, as has the number  transplants being carried ; the number  people needing transplants however, has significantly increased. 

The number  donors started  150  1980 and then went  gradually   200 1985 and continued 250 1990 and then went more sharply 320 1998. It can be clearly seen that the number donors increased rapidly 500 around the beginning of 2000 and then dropped back 180  before 2002, while the number transplants being carried  rose consistently  a low point of  less than 50  1980  nearly 150 operations  2000.

 

This means that there is a balance between the number  organs available for transplant and the number  organ donors, which means that there will obviously not be enough organs to provide each, or even most of those on the transplant list ( need  an organ) with the organ that they need.